Twitter Weekly Updates for 2010-02-28

  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • “See that fellow by the door, third from left, black coat, gun riding under the waist? He’s watching Jolene too,” said Jimmy. Gus turned. #
  • Jimmy sipped his coffee and clicked his .45's safety. The aroma of the brew filled his face. “He sees something different than we do." #
  • “He sees a meal ticket," said Gus. "She’s on the meat list down here. Hope he knows what he's dealing with." Gus flipped his safety as well. #
  • “My money’s on Jolene,” said Jimmy. “I hope this old boy has his life insurance paid up.” He scratched his unshaven neck. #
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  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • Jolene stopped outside the door and watched a car pass. She studied the door and the road. “You think he’s going to try it?” asked Gus. #
  • “What y’all want today?” said the waitress. “Got good meatloaf. The fried chicken is nearly famous around here. Chocolate cake is bonified.” #
  • Gus and Jimmy considered their options. Nearly famous chicken was tough to turn down. #
  • Inside the man waited and Jolene waited outside, sizing up the situation. “I’ll have the chicken, mashed potatoes, greens," said Gus. #
  • “How about you?” she said looking at Jimmy. “You look like a meatloaf man to me. Mac and cheese might do you right too.” #
  • “Yeah, give me that. And some light bread. No butter,” said Jimmy. She scribbled and walked away. Jimmy adjusted his view of the door. #
  • Utensils clattered against plates and the choppy sound of voices in conversation hummed in a dull wave interrupted by a laugh now and then. #
  • Jimmy knew it was going to be a situation to deal with. He just did not know how it would play out. Gus focused on the man in the coat. #
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  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • “Is that one of Ritko’s men? A fed? Special agent?” asked Gus. “He looks official. Like he took a test to earn a badge.” #
  • “No. Look at his shoes. No FBI type goes sockless like that,” said Jimmy. “He’s a freelancer. He’s working for a vig on Jolene.” #
  • “How much is riding on her?” said Gus, not surprised. “She’s bountied up to the limit by now. Maybe $50 grand. 75 tops.” #
  • Jimmy cut his eyes over toward Gus. “She should be at Shewl’s. She ain’t. She’s here. He knows it. It's coming down here in a minute.” #
  • “We can’t let her walk into it,” said Gus. “He’s got to have somebody working with him. He ain’t alone. Somebody’s in here or out there.” #
  • Nothing unusual happened in the parking lot. The man in the coat looked nervous. Jolene seemed lost in thought, looking into the distance. #
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About Terry Taylor

Terry Taylor has worked at nearly every major agency in the industry, including Chiat/Day, DMB&B, BBDO, Ogilvy & Mather, Earle Palmer Brown and Arnold. Besides national awards in Communication Arts, D&AD, Clios and Addies, his portfolio boasts the likes of Nissan, Pepsi, SAP, Budweiser, Twix, Virginia Lottery, Barbados and Burger King. Perhaps you’ve seen his work on the Super Bowl, or his recent novel on Twitter, or his picture in the post office. Okay, that’s not him.
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