Twitter Weekly Updates for 2010-03-14

  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • Jimmy raked a shot under the car and grazed the left ankle on the other side. A woman’s scream rose into the eave of the small building. #
  • The sockless man lay dead, face down in front of Jolene. She lay down behind his body, seeing a torso on the ground behind the Buick. #
  • A hand tipped with red nail polish curled over the hood and fired aimlessly. One round hit the side of a bread truck. The rest hit nothing. #
  • Eight shots. 9mm. The shooter had four more shots. It didn’t matter. Jimmy saw how it would end; two dead shooters – like always. #
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  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • Jolene lay flat on the ground, her ear on the asphalt. She stretched her arms and pumped five rounds into the tire. The car collapsed. #
  • Jimmy saw the woman's head hit the pavement. He finished her with one shot in the ear from 30 feet. Sirens droned down the road. #
  • Gus could see from the inside that it was over, unless there was a third shooter. There was. He ran from the left and fired toward the café. #
  • Glass dropped onto tables and people screamed. Jolene rolled over the corpse of the first man. Headlights exploded. Metal dinged. #
  • A bullet wiggled through the window, divoting Gus’ left ear. It sounded like a zipper. Blood ran down his neck and stained his shirt. #
  • Jimmy leaned into the left side of the door and opened the man’s head with a squeeze. The sirens were too close now. “Go,” he said. “Now.” #
  • Gus ran into the parking lot, pulled Jolene up, and they ran to the back. She had the keys out, ready to crank her stolen car. She did not. #
  • Panic poured from the small building in awkward stumbling. Jimmy and Gus ran across waist-deep grass into the pines. Jolene waited. #
  • Three deputies slid to a stop, spraying gravel as their cruisers lurched into the parking lot. Nothing happened for at least two minutes. #
  • Radios crackled. The officers assessed the situation. Three bodies. Bullet holes all over the place. People inside and outside yelling. #
  • A woman with a weapon stood beside the dumpster. A 9 mm hung loosely in her hand; her face so calm, so detached. #
  • Jolene was tired of running. She was tired of being shot at. She looked almost asleep. Deputies’ voices echoed. She only heard the shots. #
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  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • One shot. Then another. Three more. Five. These deputies were not the top of their class at target practice. Jolene did not move. #
  • At the edge of the woods, Jimmy turned to go back for her. Gus called her name over and over. The deputies fired again and again. #
  • Cinderblock fell in chunks on the asphalt with each round the deputies fired. They had no regard for the customers safety. They just shot. #
  • That was the clue for Jimmy. Jolene was way ahead of him. Gus knew things were not as they seemed and stepped from behind the vehicle. #
  • Jolene jerked the 9 mm up and sighted past her wrists. The mechanics of her weapon jerked over and over, shells bouncing end over end. #
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  • Sail Cat Road continues now. #
  • Jimmy worked around the back of the building. Shots raked above him. Some caught in the peeling roof splashing gray bits onto his head. #
  • Dropping to one knee, Jolene put two rounds into one deputy. His chest opened onto the ground with a slush like a box of cheap wine. #
  • Both of his knees crunched into cracked asphalt. When violent men die, the sudden peacefulness pools in their eyes. This one almost smiled. #
  • A millisecond after Gus pulled the trigger, the second deputy’s arm exploded, knocking the gun into a perfect arc across the hood of a Ford. #
  • A grimace puckered the man’s face into the horrid realization that death was coming with the next shot. He clinched his teeth. #
  • The next round from Gus’ .45 caught the shooter in the groin and doubled him over with a yelp. The third took off the back of his head. #
  • Jolene crippled the third deputy with a grazing knee wound, then laid him flat on his back with another hit in the shoulder. A truck passed. #
  • The driver sped up as he realized the nature of the events unfolding in front of the restaurant. His cell was pressed hard against his ear. #
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About Terry Taylor

Terry Taylor has worked at nearly every major agency in the industry, including Chiat/Day, DMB&B, BBDO, Ogilvy & Mather, Earle Palmer Brown and Arnold. Besides national awards in Communication Arts, D&AD, Clios and Addies, his portfolio boasts the likes of Nissan, Pepsi, SAP, Budweiser, Twix, Virginia Lottery, Barbados and Burger King. Perhaps you’ve seen his work on the Super Bowl, or his recent novel on Twitter, or his picture in the post office. Okay, that’s not him.
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